Monday, June 7, 2010

Haiku Poem.

tired of trying
impossible to love you
you make it that way

want to feel your touch
want to make you understand
want to make you mine

hope, pain, desire
floating in my heart and soul
you are standing there

you do not see me
standing here, waiting, hoping,
aching for your love.

3 comments:

  1. At times I wonder
    Who on this earth could it be?
    I wonder at times.

    Yeah, Haiku was never my strong point...

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  2. another good one. Love it!!
    powerful word choices.

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  3. Haha nice try, Clayton. At least you got the syllables down right...

    Thanks, Matt! It needs a little editing, I think, i used "hope" twice, i try to use different words in order to not sound redundant.

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