wow, this is amazing. The image is powerful and, although you stray from a traditional haiku's thematic elements, your use of the structure is brilliant. The best thing about poetry is that you can do whatever you want with it.
wow, this is amazing. The image is powerful and, although you stray from a traditional haiku's thematic elements, your use of the structure is brilliant. The best thing about poetry is that you can do whatever you want with it.
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